oh wow I was not sure what was going to happen there for a second. You really have some powerful writing. I mean when that turtle flipped over I was terrified that he might never get right side up. I hope there is another issue coming out soon. You need to do one where Timothy and the frog battle the evil Dr. Crocodile to the death.
I hope your teacher didn't write "wow!" on your comic, if my teacher wrote that, I would have been pissed! Anyway I love the your story especially the ending... Shaya showed my your neopet that your designed, pretty cool, can;t wait to see more. Your fan, dre.
The moral of the story is ants don't work well unless joined together by someone in power to help assess the situation. Is this about unionizing workers?
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oh wow I was not sure what was going to happen there for a second. You really have some powerful writing. I mean when that turtle flipped over I was terrified that he might never get right side up. I hope there is another issue coming out soon. You need to do one where Timothy and the frog battle the evil Dr. Crocodile to the death.
I laughed, I cried, I died inside a little, and then i was reborn, all as I followed Timothy the turtle on his epic journey.
Thank you Ms Hoffer
I hope your teacher didn't write "wow!" on your comic, if my teacher wrote that, I would have been pissed! Anyway I love the your story especially the ending... Shaya showed my your neopet that your designed, pretty cool, can;t wait to see more. Your fan, dre.
I'm so glad it had a happy ending! I was worried!
The moral of the story is ants don't work well unless joined together by someone in power to help assess the situation. Is this about unionizing workers?
This made my day. And I love how the ant conquered the turtle at the end and made him carry the ants around on his back forever....
I am a Timothy fan! <3
Timothy is the MAN!!!!
Thanks for all the comments you guys. They made me giggle! ;D
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